How Analogy Cuts Both Ways

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

Analogy is easily one of my favorite tools in the writer's toolkit because it’s relatively easy to deploy -- but difficult to effectively use. It provides your audience with a recognizeable and easy way to understand everything from the organizational structure of a business to the utility of a new product. The central power of analogy is the way it turns comparisons into ‘frameworks’ that can significantly ease your audience’s comprehension when strategically applied.

The barrier to entry when using analogies is so low that most people end up unintentionally using them every day without even realizing it. This article is riddled with a bunch that I didn’t even mean to put into it, they’re just that integral to the English language.  

 

Here’s a very familiar example: 

  

We talk about housing markets as “a bubble ready to burst”. Housing markets are really complex. They have so many variables, it’s almost impossible to describe them to the public without an analogy. A framework that can be visualized makes this much easier. The bubble is clear and simple. The notion of it bursting is quite powerful too. We see the bubble getting bigger. We know it can’t continue forever, but we don’t know exactly when it will pop. We can only sense it’s about to happen. 

 

Analogy is not the same as Metaphor and Simile, but they are often used together. Metaphor is calling one thing something else entirely. Think “my math teacher is the devil”, sorry to all the math teachers reading this but today you are my scapegoat (oh look a metaphor!). Simile is the next step up; think “my math teacher is like the devil”. Simile recognizes a single comparison, letting readers draw their own assumptions of exactly how the teacher is comparable to the devil. Maybe they’re a tyrant who rules their domain and enjoys inflicting torment through brutally difficult tests. I for one would assume a math teacher is like the devil because they both enjoy ‘sin’ (that joke's an apology to all the math teachers because only you guys will get it).  

 

Analogy takes a like-comparison and runs with it, exploring its limits by demonstrating a number of similarities. Take a mental note when you feel this following analogy stops working for you and you’ll get what I mean.  

 

Although analogy is the most powerful of the three tools, using it is a lot like running with scissors. It's flashy, attention grabbing, and can quickly turn into a bad idea if you don’t know when to slow down and question your choices. You need to make sure it’s the right pair of scissors to run with for your intended purpose. Running with a bad pair of scissors means that the longer you try to force them to meet your needs the more likely you are to misapply them. You might want to continue running with the scissors because you’ve already committed this far. So, you double down and now you’re running with two pairs of scissors at the same time, which is twice as dangerous, and (at around this point) the analogous comparison has gone far past credulity and entered the world of the absurd. 

 

As a thought experiment, there is a lot of potential value in getting to that absurdist point because depending on the two elements of the analogy, it may take a shockingly long time to get through all the appropriately correlative comparisons. A comparison with a high level of parallel elements can mean the analogy is actually quite strong. Pushing past that point to increasingly tenuous comparisons (i.e. airplanes are like monarch butterflies because they have wings, migrate to Florida every winter by the thousands, and are interested in... flowers?) enters the territory of ‘forcing’ an analogy when you begin assuming that every element of framework must cleanly correlate with something you’re trying to describe. However, doing this exercise can help you to consider your problems in a nonconventional way and even help reframe them.  

 

On the other hand, forcing an analogy can make you overconfident in your understanding of your problem and can cause you to make ill-informed decisions. A good analogy should help you think outside of the box, instead of just providing you another box to graft your problem/idea onto. You might feel that your business compares well to how a pirate ship is run with its ruthless Captain, First Mate, and keeping all of its treasure hidden in the Caymen Islands, but if you force the analogy and try to literally run it like a ship by barking captain’s orders to your crew and throwing the dissenters overboard you’re going to end up with a mutiny on your hands. 

 

Entire industries use analogy to make themselves sound less intimidating and more comprehensible to newcomers. If you try to explain to me how blockchain technology is a distributed ledger system within a decentralized network of users, my eyes will glaze over. However, we can understand why it became popular to discuss cryptocurrency as “digital gold” that you “mine” and keep in a “wallet”. A similar thing is happening in the AI space where we describe the “training” process of large language models like that of a pet where they are given digital “treats/rewards” and “punishments” based on their outputs to get them closer to desired behaviors. Simple, visual concepts that we’re all familiar with make the new and obtuse more approachable. 

 

When it comes to your own use of analogy in the workspace consider a complex problem you’re currently facing and the ways analogy can help you provide an approachable framework to explain the situation. Say a member of staff is making a workspace intolerable because they are disruptive and insert themselves into projects or discussions where they aren’t needed. Or an investor would be interested in supporting your project but isn’t convinced of its feasibility without a test or prototype. Draw out a diagram of the parties involved and their relationships before asking yourself if there’s power dynamics at play, emotional factors, functional relationships, procedural stages, and anything else that defines how these elements relate to each other.  

 

Is your problem like a boardgame, a sporting team, a Greek myth, a movie, an illness? Inspiration for the appropriate analogy can come from anywhere, but when you’ve found one that seems to have a high level of parallels, begin mapping your problem onto that framework while highlighting the points it’s different. These differences are crucial to personalizing your deployment of the framework and explaining the problem to others. If there’s a “rock in your shoe”, then would it be better if the “rock” was “smoothed out” or just “removed” entirely? If the “team is resentful of a star player” getting the most “field time”, then could you “increase the frequency you rotate the bench?”  

 

Analogies don’t usually produce hard answers or decisive recommendations, but they assist you in focusing on the questions you should ask to effectively tackle your problems and communicate your proposed solutions. Real problems are never as simple or easily addressed as we would like them to be, but a solution can often become more obvious with a bit of strategic reframing. Like a hot knife through butter, you’ll be cutting through your problems and clarifying confusion before you know it. 

 

Building a Skeleton: How Writing Comes Together From the Inside-Out.

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

Whenever I write I like to imagine I’m building a person. Everyone has their own unique voice, personality, perspective, shape, attitude, flaws, and a multitude of other elements too long to comprehensively list (nor would you want to read). Writing is much the same, with a little bit of ourselves, our quirks, our voice put into everything we produce. We are all Doctor Frankenstein trying to bring our work to life.  

When I say ‘building a person’ what I mean is starting from the inside. The place I always start is constructing a skeleton -- literally the bare bones of what points I want to make or broader arguments I want to convey -- in the order I’m planning it to appear in the final draft. Laying out the ‘bones’ of your sections including title, topic, and themes gives you a clear framework you can quickly reference to get a sense for the flow of the completed piece. Instead of writing a bunch of disparate points and spending hours reorganizing at the end, think of the paragraphs as buckets of like-information that you can use as a roadmap to quickly visualize your completed piece early on. One page of structured information with keynotes is a far more manageable way to review and restructure a piece from head-to-toe than a 10-page semi-finalized draft. Now, a skeleton of a piece can’t stand on its own because even with the foundation in place it’s far from complete. It’s dull, disconnected, and not very ‘fleshed-out’ (you see where I’m going with this?)  

 

The next layer is the guts and arteries, the major points of connection that ‘flow’ throughout the piece. I’m talking about the points that bridge the gaps between the separate bones so the transition from one to the other is much smoother. This is the layer that starts to hold everything together and brings some cohesion by clarifying the connections between your key points. It’s also where you can start planning out any overarching themes that you want to reinforce across the piece. If you were writing about sales and wanted to have a section summarizing an industry success story followed by a section discussing a brief history of mercantilism, they aren’t unrelated, but it’s at these leaps that you’re most likely to lose some readers. Smoothing out the transition with an overarching theme like ‘evergreen sales tactics across history’ gives your readers an informational bridge to cross. 

 

Next comes the muscle; the references, the evidence, the expert quotes and sources that strengthen and back up what you’ve said. You might have been collecting these already to guide your direction, but building muscle is often the most exhausting and labor-intensive part of writing. No one ever said building muscle was easy and if you want your piece to be its strongest it’s where much of the ‘work’ really lies. Have a coffee, or a protein shake if that helps you get into the mindset better, and strap in for five more reps (or refs?). At this point your piece should be looking pretty functional but still a little raw. Time to wrap it up with the last layer.  

 

Skin! Skin is the layer where you can start really adding personality, character, and voice to your work. It’s the asides and the notes that make your work feel more human and less robotic (note: remind me to renew my subscription for ChatGPT). While I personally try to avoid using AI as much as possible in my writing it does help me find specific words that sound more professional, or a it suggested: it helps me "endeavor, to the utmost extent feasible, to employ terminology and verbiage that exudes an elevated level of sophistication, intellectual refinement, and professional gravitas.” Your mileage may vary. Skin is the refining and accessorizing of your piece. To me it’s the most enjoyable part of the writing process because it’s the stage when detail and nuance can be added. The danger with the Skin stage being that it’s also the point when you must determine your work is finished. A quote from Céline Sciamma’s phenomenal film Portrait of a Lady on Fire always comes to mind.  

 

HÉLOÏSE: When do you know when it's finished? 

 

MARIANNE: At some point you stop. 

 

Skin wraps everything up and gives one final pass to what was once a jumbled bag of ideas, points, and references, turning them into a cohesive unit of information that’s ready to send out.  

 

So, congratulations doctor, you’ve completed your piece and with the help of a handy framework to structure your approach you didn’t go mad in the process (hopefully). The last, very crucial, step before hitting ‘publish’ is to take a deep breath and declare: 

 

“IT’S ALIVE!” 

Raising Trust Raises Dollars

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

Fundraisers believe in the power of community. They believe in the charity of the individual and the power that can come from harnessing many individual donations to cause large-scale social impact. But it’s in proving and communicating the impact of contributions that many fundraisers struggle.

When you make a donation you aren’t buying a service or a product, you’re buying a promise. The promise is that your contribution will have a bigger impact when pooled than it could have individually. Fundraisers attract donations from large and diverse audiences of donors, each with differing levels of investment in the cause and familiarity with the structure of pooled funds. Getting too analytical risks alienating donors who are focused on the big picture impact from those who want to know how their personal contribution specifically had impact.

It’s extremely difficult to quantify how much impact each individual brings to the project, and the danger arising from this is donors becoming apathetic to the necessity of their individual donations. When discussing your successes, bring clear and honest examples that can be understood by anyone. Leave your audience feeling that their donations are well cared for and have made the difference they hoped.

When hosting presentations for donors, a fundraiser’s job is to demonstrate success. Nothing convinces people that their money is being used effectively more than tangible results. This is of course easier said than done when a fundraiser is tasked with conveying complex data in an accessible and engaging way. If your presentation is long-winded or caught up in the nuanced details of research, the data itself may indeed be crucial to explaining how you arrived at the breakthrough, but to avoid risking donor disengagement you must focus first and foremost on the breakthrough itself. 

The magic of keeping donors engaged and willing to continue contributing lies in an effective balance between factual reporting and understandable success stories. Exploring how an individual was affected by your research, or how their life specifically changed due to the funding, is a great way to give a face and name to donors. It provides a case-study of how your organization seeks to help other similarly struggling individuals, and can remind donors of where they would be if the organization was not able to help them due to a lack of funding.

Fundraising must carefully balance its messaging between emotional calls to action, and the factual results of their research. So be strategic with your presentations, charts, and graphs. Make the most crucial takeaways the most memorable, and don’t spend all of your time getting caught in the specifics. Broad change happens thanks to a broad base of support, and that requires building a longstanding trust in your organizations purported goals, and in proving your efficacy at achieving them.

With these struggles and tips in mind, Blast is excited to offer a new course, “How to Build Powerful Presentations”. The program is designed for professionals facing diverse audiences, looking to improve the clarity and impact of their presentations. By taking the course, participants learn how to structure a clear, powerful story. They also learn proven methods to build impactful slides that reassure and inspire audiences very time.

Upcoming Fundraiser Sessions: January 20 & January 22 2025 4pm-7pm EST.

Taking Centre Stage

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

How bad is your stage fright? When making public appearances in front of a crowd, there’s a fine line between those who crave the spotlight and those who feel safer behind the scenes or in the audience. This is doubly so for those working in promotions who have the added pressure of not just representing themselves, but representing an entire brand identity. 

From video games, to industry conventions and fast food, promotional presentations are unique in the dynamic they create between presenter and audience. At most promotional presentations, the audience is self-selected. They’re there looking to get a sneak peek at what their favorite IP has planned for the future. They’re there for more than just data and sales metrics. The audience wants to be the first to hear the inside scoop. More than anything, they want to be entertained.

Thinking of promotional presentations in this way, as a show and performance, rather than a strictly corporate affair, is a crucial way to build audience engagement. Wowing an audience doesn’t mean flashy spectacle and pyrotechnics (though if there’s the budget for some flamethrowers I don’t see how it could hurt), it requires an engaging confidence in your information delivery. 

This is to say, you need to impress them. The least impressive thing is reading every word verbatim off of presentation slides, adding nothing more. When hosting a promotional presentation, you’re performing, you’re a one person show. So you really have to learn your lines. An overly constructed presentation that’s long, complex, and writing heavy is like putting your entire annotated script up on the screen. Sure, all the content is technically there, but does the audience really gain much from seeing that?

Instead, think of your presentation as your cheat sheet. You’re the star and your presentation is the backdrop. It’s there to support and bolster your performance — to give the audience something big to think about. Making a point more impactful, making a crucial statistic memorable — these are the moments you change the slide, or bring up a visual that creates a special, lasting impact.

With these struggles and tips in mind, Blast is launching an exciting new course, “How to Build Powerful Presentations.” It’s designed for professionals who want to take their presentations to the next level. By taking the course you’ll learn proven methods to tell a powerful story and design impactful slides that help your presentation leaving the audience saying “wow!”.

Upcoming Promoter Sessions: January 15 & January 16 2025 4pm-7pm EST.

How to Face the Dragon

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

I’m a big fan of the mythology behind Dragon’s Den. The lone entrepreneur charges into battle against a panel of five hungry beasts, trying their best to gain the dragons’ favor (and capital) without sacrificing too much of their company in the process. Despite the more ‘fantastical’ elements of the show it’s still the image that comes to mind for many aspiring entrepreneurs who wish to see their own venture succeed. While the reality of ‘reality’ television is always questionable, there are some major lessons that entrepreneurs can take when building their own pitch presentations. 

  1. Time is Money: Wasting an investors time is an incredible way to lose their interest and their funding. You have roughly five minutes to pitch, explain, and establish trust in your venture before an investor even begins considering your offer. Instead of burning valuable minutes building up your backstory, struggles, and future goals, focus on what you have to offer here and now. Lead with value and follow with context. 

  2. Be engaging and clear: No one knows the nuanced details of your project like you do so it can be easy to forget that no one is where you are when it comes to your venture. It’s so to lose investors and customers explaining the niche and specific elements of your product. What may very well be an impressive stat, or innovative change to a classic design, will fall flat if not communicated clearly and concisely. Your presentation should be engaging, easily understandable, and focused on the things that really count. You can always elaborate more if an investor is interested in specifics, but if they can’t understand the broad strokes of your presentation then they can’t understand the value you want to bring.

  3. Leave a lasting impact: Bad presentations are notorious for being long slogs of dull information, so learn how to defy that expectation. Add personality to your presentations by delivering it with a conversational confidence. Don’t rely on your presentation to do the pitch for you, use them strategically to deliver the most important information in an impactful and memorable way. Keep focused on success stories and ongoing plans that show you’ve planned the future of your venture and can execute it with investor support. You want your venture to be seen as a sure investment, so even if you leave without a deal, you’re sure they’ll remember your project. If your presentation feels like every other presentation the investor has seen before, then you’ve given them nothing new to consider.

With these struggles and tips in mind, Blast is launching an exciting new course “How to Build Powerful Presentations”, designed for professionals who want to improve the way they build presentations that shine in front of investors and customers. By taking the course you’ll learn proven methods to structure a clear, compelling story, build clean, impactful slides and bring it all together in a way that gives you the platform to communicate your pitch with confidence every time.

Upcoming Entrepreneur Sessions: January 6 & January 8 2025 4pm-7pm EST.

The Art of Impact

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Writer: Craig Meerkamper

Presentations aren’t just about sharing information; they’re about creating a connection, building trust, and inspiring action. For many professionals, particularly those offering a vision or sharing results, presentations can be the bridge between innovation and investment, concept and commitment. Yet, even the most compelling insights can lose their power if not delivered with care. The challenge lies in balancing clarity with depth, and impact with simplicity.

When we present, we’re not just informing—we’re inviting. We’re asking our audience to see what we see and believe in our vision. This requires a careful, thoughtful approach that avoids overwhelming the audience with too many details or complex data. While every insight may feel essential, too much information can obscure the core message, making it hard for audiences to walk away with a clear understanding of what truly matters.

To create impactful presentations, start by focusing on the heart of your message. What do you most want your audience to remember? Then, consider how best to convey that core idea in a way that resonates. This might mean sacrificing some data points in favor of clarity or crafting a narrative that helps your audience see themselves in the story you’re telling.

Another essential element is visual simplicity. Slides brimming with text or dense with graphics hinder comprehension. Instead, aim for slides that deliver the message cleanly, conscisely - rather than give every possible point. Each element—whether a graphic, chart, or piece of text—should reinforce the main point, not distract from it.

And never underestimate the power of sharing real life examples. At the end of the day, it’s often the stories we tell that stick. An anecdote about a customer, a case study, or an example can humanize data, giving the audience a natural way to care about your message in a way that facts and figures alone cannot.

Presentations, like any act of communication, are about building a relationship. You’re not just presenting a series of facts; you’re building trust, nurturing interest, and inspiring action.

With these struggles and tips in mind, Blast is excited to offer a new course, “How to Build Powerful Presentations”, designed for professionals looking to improve their communications skills. By taking the course, participants learn how to tell a powerful story. They also learn proven methods to build high-impact slides that deliver the most value for audiences.

Upcoming Sessions for Everyone: January 27 & January 29 2025 4pm-7pm EST.

Barber Shop Tattoo

My barber shop is a special place. Black and white checker tiled floors. The walls an eye-popping canary yellow. Pictures and newspaper clippings of hockey stars, winning teams and winning goals randomly scotch-taped to the walls. Black and white headshots of young guys with perfect skin and fantastically quaffed hair. Plastic Christmas decorations. A small flat screen TV duct-taped up near the ceiling so everyone can see. And hanging in the middle of it all - a dusty ceramic pink pig with tiny angelic silk wings turning ever so slightly each time the door opened.